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Character Design - Raelyn

Updated: Feb 17, 2021


As an author, it's my job to paint a picture for the reader's mind - to add the details necessary to imagine a world, and all the characters within - and immerse them into my own imagination. But sometimes, it's nice to let the painting do the talking for me. As a result, I've always wanted original concept art to complement my work, and to add to the 'depth' of the world of Kel Doran.


In this installment, I'd like to take a moment to discuss a new character to my world. She appeared only as a whisper in Book One, and made an intense, teasing appearance in Book Two. Raelyn, Kurodai Sentinel for the Order of Myrrh, makes her stunning entrance to my series in Book Three, Kingdom of One...and I feel she deserves a proper introduction.


The point of this article isn't to just draw a character, but to develop her, from her weapons to her hairstyle, from armor to clothing, etc. So with that being said, let me introduce you to - Raelyn.


Raelyn's Design


Because Rae's character has been mostly a mystery up to this point in the series, her descriptions in

the books had to mirror that. Her trademark feathered braids, representative of all Kurodai warriors, were mentioned...but little else, short of her exotic accent. So, to bring a character to life, I needed to provide more details.


Since I'm not a professional artist, my first go-to for a character concept is Fiverr. You can find surprisingly good artists, and their rates are incredibly reasonable. It does, however, take quite a bit of time to filter through the 'fluff' and get to the real talent. It can be a fun task for a weekend afternoon, though, if you have time to spare.



I spend a little too much time on Fiverr, and for my efforts, they've rewarded me with a 'spends too much time on Fiverr' badge :) I guess I can't complain too much. They throw a few discounts and incentives my way from time to time...probably to ensure I keep my badge! The best perk, however, is the ability to refer others at a discount. If you've been interested in Fiverr, or want to see what options are out there, click on the banner below and get 20% off your first gig. It's not a lot, but might be enough to bring your first project within reach.


Once I find a designer, the job is on me to provide as much information as I can...otherwise, it's literally their creative ability to piece together a character. If that's the case, the end result is really THEIR character...not yours.


I put together a description in MS Word, along with a few examples and related information. Below is the form I sent to my designer for Rae's initial design, minus a spoiler ;) As you can see, it contains plenty of details, but I also like the artists to have a little freedom in their design. The first example image is a pencil drawing of mine (still not completed), to demonstrate MY opinion of what Raelyn looks like. Second, another Kurodai sentinel I had drawn up...Syndra. This was merely to show the style of character, of what I felt a Kurodai warrior would look like. And finally, a piece of artwork I love, that shows the hair/accessories I would like to see.


Raelyn's First Draft


Two days later, I received the artist's first draft. It was really good, in my opinion. It hit all the marks I had laid out for him: light armor, twin blades, braided hair, scarred face. She was a warrior - a pretty intimidating one. My only real issue was her stance was SO similar to Syndra's example, I was worried the two might be confused.


My revision requests were simple - reposition her walking towards the camera, looking off to the side. Also, add a torn cloak around her waist, and another piece on her shoulders. Everything else was either too subtle to mention, or I was already very pleased with.




His second attempt was pretty much perfect. If I had a chance to go over her clothes once more, I'd suggest a few adjustments. But I was so impressed with his vision, I wanted to keep moving forward and see what he could do.


The artist cleaned up the sketch, providing a 'clean line' rendition, then proceeded to add moderate shading to bring out the shadows and add depth to the character.









The results speak for themselves. I can't say enough about Vadim's work, and am linking him here to help drum up a little more business, as I know competition is tough on Fiverr.


Clean Lines / Shaded


Adding Color


With most of my concept designs, this is where I would stop. I like to add a sepia gradient and place the character against a piece of parchment for effect, but I've never gone any further...until now. If you're already skilled at Photoshop or digital art, this part may not provide much insight. But if you're new to the digital arena, or just want to try something new...keep reading to see how you can create a colored version of your concept art with minimal additional effort.


The concept behind this artistic technique is sound: focus on the values rather than the colors, and your design will be more detailed / appealing. Essentially, if you just color in line art, you spend so much time worrying about color tones and composition that you lose detail and your work doesn't get the attention it needs. So before proceeding, please ensure ALL shading is complete and your work has a good range of tonal values.